Deadline: STAGE PLAY Festival. Get play performed by actors. FULL FEEDBACK:
http://www.wildsound.ca/play_contest.html
Watch the 6 Stage Play Winners for 2015
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Deadline: STAGE PLAY Festival. Get play performed by actors. FULL FEEDBACK:
http://www.wildsound.ca/play_contest.html
Watch the 6 Stage Play Winners for 2015
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Deadline for Feature Screenplay Festival: http://www.wildsound.ca/screenplaycontest.html
Watch the 19 Feature Screenplay Winners for 2015:
FEATURE SCRIPT – FEI JIDecember 2015 Reading Written by James C. Peters | FEATURE SCRIPT – A Ghost Story of ChristmasDecember 2015 Reading Written by Eddie Yaroch |
FEATURE SCRIPT – Yellow Touch Red, You’re DeadNovember 2015 Reading Written by Lauren Hoekstra | FEATURE SCRIPT – BELLE BREZINGNovember 2015 Reading Written by Margaret Carlyle Price |
FEATURE SCRIPT – 66 WestOctober 2015 Reading Written by Christopher Willis | FEATURE SCRIPT – Death Don’t Us PartOctober 2015 Reading Written by Olaf Baumann |
FEATURE SCRIPT – Pontiff No ReturnOctober 2015 Reading Written by Eric Boyd | FEATURE SCRIPT Reading of LEGACYSeptember 2015 Reading Written by Marc W. Johnson |
FEATURE SCRIPT Reading of THREE PLAYSeptember 2015 Reading Written by John-Arthur Ingram | Feature SCRIPT – THE LAST ADVENTURE OF SHAY BLAZEAugust 2015 Reading Written by Howard… |
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TV Screenplay Festival. Submit Today.
Deadline for Television Pilot/Spec Screenplay Festival: http://tvfestival.org/
Watch the 16 TV Spec Screenplay Winners for 2015:
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TV Screenplay Festival. Submit Today.
Deadline for Television Pilot/Spec Screenplay Festival: http://tvfestival.org/
Watch the 15 TV Pilot Screenplay Winners for 2015:
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Deadline: FEATURE Screenplay Festival – Get FULL FEEDBACK. Get script performed by professional actors
http://www.wildsound.ca/screenplaycontest.html
Read Today’s Feature Screenplay Loglines and Pitches:
Title: NINE SCARS
http://www.wildsoundfestival.com/nine_scars_by_kelly_crawfo…
Written by: Kelly Crawford
Type: Feature Script
Genre: Thriller
Title: SEEMINGLY HARMONIOUS
http://www.wildsoundfestival.com/seemingly_harmonious_by_de…
Written by: Dengxian Cao
Type: Feature Script
Genre: Sci-Fi, Thriller
Deadline Dec. 15th: FEATURE Screenplay Festival – Get FULL FEEDBACK. Get script performed by professional actors: http://www.wildsound.ca/screenplaycontest.html
Watch the 2 winning Table Readings performed by professional actors.
Script #1 – FEATURE SCRIPT – FEI JI
Script #2 – FEATURE SCRIPT – A Ghost Story of Christmas
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CONCUSSION (USA 2015) **
Directed by Peter Landesman
Starring: Will Smith, Luke Wilson, Alec Baldwin, Albert Brooks
Slated for a Christmas release opening on Christmas Day, CONCUSSION has been picked probably because the studios thought it would be a film that would make a difference. Concussion is thought do to professional football what cancer did to the tobacco companies. Michael Mann’s THE INSIDER was a superb film about whistleblower Wigand played by Russell Crowe.
Unfortunately, Peter Landesman film about Dr. Bennet Omalu (Will Smith) is a sad disappointment.
It all starts in the film with huge praise for Dr. Omalu. He is cited as as an expert giving testimony in a murder case in court. He is questioned on his credentials, which he rattles on and on and on and on. For he is a very smart man. But the film is not.
The film for one is too formulaic. No surprises are in store – in any shape or form. Dr. Omalu is introduced in the film as the protagonist hero. As a forensic pathologist, he finds medical evidence of a common thread of suicides among former NHL football players. He discovers or rather names the disorder, chronic traumatic encephalopathy (CTE). Before long, he comes head to head with the high rollers of the NHL who want him silenced. Dr. Omalu is offered a Washington job that he declines. And the script calls for him to romantically fall in love with his tenant, a nurse also from Nigeria and have a daughter. That is too much niceness for a Christmas movie.
The character of Dr. Omalu can do no wrong. He is already, deemed the most intelligent person in America, by the list of degrees the audience is informed at the start of the film. He is shown angry for all the right reasons. He is shy, kind, handsome and hardworking. He will go against the bad people. He talks to the bodies he performs autopsies on. He given choice dialogue like: “If you don’t speak for the dead, who will?” One would like to see a more believable human being – one who has faults and who makes mistakes in real life. The only scene he is shown with a slight fault is when he is accused of being a self-righteous bastard, but even then, he has a reason for being one. As Dr. Omalu comes from Nigeria, Smith plays him with an African accent, which many will assume is the accurate Nigerian accent.
The film is dotted at regular intervals of the deaths of various NFL players beginning with the longtime, Super Bowl-winning center for the Steelers, Mike Webster (David Morse). Dr. Omalu did his first autopsy on Webster. There are several other heroes in the film like Julian Bailes (Alec Baldwin) and Omalu’s boss (Albert Brooks).
But despite the film being formulaic in dishing out a romance, confrontation scenes, feel good and feel bad segments, the film is a narrative mess. An example is the segment in which his girl Prema (Gugu Mbatha-Raw) speeds way in a car believing she is followed only to result in a miscarriage, one that serves no real purpose in the story.
The best thing about the film is the appearance of British actor Eddie Marsan as expert Dr. Steven Dekosky.
Unfortunately, the film does not have more of him. Marsan shows how acting can be done with the minimum of dialogue.
CONCUSSION’s potential as a film could be better tapped with a script doctor doing an autopsy on the original screenplay.
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Deadline Dec. 15th: FEATURE Screenplay Festival – Get FULL FEEDBACK. Get script performed by professional actors
https://t.co/ZheXxQ7jJq? Writing Festival (@WritingFestival) December 13, 2015
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Deadline Dec. 15th: #THRILLER / #SUSPENSE#Screenplay#Festival
FULL FEEDBACK. Get script performed by actors
https://t.co/uGGRM1ia3W? THRILLER Festival (@WritingSpecial) December 13, 2015
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Deadline Dec. 15th: #COMEDY#screenplay#festival. FULL FEEDBACK. Get script #performed by professional #actors
? Festival for Comedy (@bestshortfilms) December 13, 2015
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Deadline Dec. 15th: #HORROR#Screenplay#Festival. Get script performed by professional actors. Get FULL FEEDBACK.
https://t.co/8dNgpnpr8a? Festival for HORROR (@BestMovieScript) December 13, 2015
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Deadline Dec. 15th: #ACTION / #ADVENTURE#Screenplay#Festival. FULL FEEDBACK. Get script performed by actors
https://t.co/d8SGIw8yRe? ActionAdventure Fest (@watchmoviesfree) December 13, 2015
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Deadline Dec. 15th: #Fantasy / #SciFi#Screenplay#Festival. FULL FEEDBACK. Get script performed at festival
https://t.co/foMhEONWJL? Fantasy/Sci-Fi Fest (@PodcastsReviews) December 13, 2015
ALVIN AND THE CHIPMUNKS: ROAD CHIP (USA 2015) **1/2
Directed by Walt Becker
Review by Gilbert Seah
Lots of puns in the Alvin Chipmunks movies – Chipwrecked for shipwrecked, Fast and Furry-ious for Fast and Furious and Road Chip for Road Trip. But there are no super fast cars or races nor a long road trip in the 4th instalment of the Chipmunks films, but it tries its best to cling on to past Hollywood box-office successes.
For the less demanding viewer, ALVIN AND THE CHIPMUNKS: ROAD CHIP provides satisfactory entertainment much in the same vein as the other 3 films. The lazy script, credited to no less than 4 writers does not contain much of a story.
Through a series of misunderstandings, Alvin (Justin Long), Simon (Matthew Gray Gubler) and Theodore (Jesse McCartney) come to believe that Dave (Jason Lee) is going to propose to his new girlfriend in Miami…and dump them. They have three days to get to him and stop the proposal, saving themselves not only from losing Dave but possibly from gaining a terrible stepbrother, Miles (Josh Green).
It is the same old cliched result. Dave is carrying an engagement ring for his friend. (Why he is doing this, is totally unexplained.) But Dave ends up not proposing and the misunderstanding is resolved with everything going right including the Chipmunks becoming friends with Miles. Sweetly sickening isn’t it?
The casting is also lazy. The villain in the first 3 Chipmunks films was played by David Cross from the TV series – Arrested Development. He is replaced by no other than another member of the cast from the same TV series – Tony Hale. Hale is no more than another clone to Cross. Hale plays a flight marshall, who grounds the chipmunks and wants to put them in chipmunk jail. His goofy character somehow gets the butt of the jokes.
The female Chipmunks, the Chipettes (voiced by Christina Applegate, Anna Faris and Kaley Cuoco) make a too brief appearance. But the actresses’ voices are unrecognizably wasted.
One wants the script to at least attempt something different or something more daring. But it is a thread bare script lacking in ideas or good comedy setups. What the film does contain, however is a whole lot of musical dances and songs (mainly popular ones) ranging from rap to pop to country. The animated creatures boogie to the music as do the real-life actors. The dance moves are cute enough but enough is enough.
Every critic love to complain about Alvin and the Chipmunks But everyone has forgotten how much they themselves love the little creatures when they were little. And Dave’s famous scream “Alvin!!!!!!!!!!” can be heard a few times during the film, to the audience’s amusement.
But ALVIN AND THE CHIPMUNKS: ROAD CHIP should still be a box-office success, as it is a good harmless film for the littler ones, who might not understand STAR WARS or for families not able to get tickets for it.
Watch the December 2015 winning TV Pilot Screenplay.
I HEART MY DEMONS by Rebecca Scott
CAST LIST:
NARRATOR – Sean Kaufmann
EVAN – Robert Notman
ROCKY – Antosia Fiedur
RENE/CLAUDIA – Jane Smythe
CLEMANTINE/JUDITH – Jane Hailes
MATTHEW/FRED/BUSTER – Kari-Michael Helava
ANDREWS/JOE/THE KOREAN – Sean Ballantyne
Get to know writer Rebecca Scott:
1. What is your TV PILOT about?
My TV pilot is about the plight of being human, having desires, urges and needs – that contradict society, health, convention, and common sense. Basically a young near-do well wakes up one morning to find his personal demons have come to life and are moving into make his life hell.
2. Why should this screenplay be made into a TV show?
I believe this screenplay should be made into a TV show because it’s audacious, provocative, and funny as hell. Most people can relate to a flawed anti hero protagonist…
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