January 2018 ANIMATION Stories, Screenplays, and Short Films

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festival posterTHE WAVES, 4min., UK, Animation
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festival posterOUR WONDERFUL NATURE, 3min., Germany, Animation
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ACTORTV SPEC Screenplay of RICK & MORTY TV Show
January 2018 Reading
by Daniel Richardson
ACTORANIMATION Best Scene Screenplay – PHANTASMAGORIA 2020
January 2018 Reading
by Itzhak Begerano
ACTORANIMATION Best Scene Screenplay – THE 3 ROCKET RACERS
January 2018 Reading
by Philip Dumas

 

 

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Producer: Matthew Toffolo http://www.matthewtoffolo.com

Director: Kierston Drier
Casting Director: Sean Ballantyne
Editor: John Johnson

Camera Operator: Mary Cox

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Screenplay Festival: April 19, 2018 Event

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FULL CAST LIST:Val Cole, Petra O’Toole, Neil Bennett, Scott Beaudin, John Fray, Nick Wicht

FEATURE Screenplay Reading of FOR A GOOD LIFE, by Natalia Maslin

Genre: Drama, Family

A young hockey prodigy loses his brother and deals with the consequences as he learns a new family dynamic and develops a new father-son relationship.

CAST LIST:

Bill: Neil Bennett
Ben: Scott Beaudin
Narrator: Val Cole
Adam: John Fray
Morgan: Petra O’Toole
Tim: Nick Wicht

1st Scene Reading of THE GREAT ADVENTURE OF THE BENTLEY GIRLS, by Elisa Herrmann

Genre: Historical Drama

Set in England in the early 1800s, and tells the story of the Bentleys, a family composed of Aunt Lucy, the matriarch, and her three orphan nieces, Eliza, Julia, and Mary. Aunt Lucy’s goal in life is to arrange good marriages to her nieces, fulfilling a promise she made to her sister in her…

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Full Review: EYE ON JULIET (USA 2017) ***1/2

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Eye on Juliet tells the story of an unlikely encounter between Gordon (Joe Cole), a hexapod operator, and Ayusha (Lina El Arabi), a young woman from the Middle East. Gordon, guardian of a …See full summary »

Director:

Kim Nguyen

Writer:

Kim Nguyen

 

Canadian writer/director Kim Nguyen’s (WAR WITCH and last year’s TWO LOVERS AND A BEAR) new film is a meticulously crafted story of two soul mates in different parts of the world (Detroit and North Africa) that is as strange as it is difficult to believe.

The success of a movie often lies not in the credibility of the plot but on how the story, as incredible as it may be is made credible by the medium of film.  As such, despite a few far-fetched points, EYE OF JULIET succeeds in not only having the audience believe what is occurring on screen could happen, but also have them root for the protagonists, two misfits in their own cultures but in finding themselves, and meaning in their somewhat meaningless lives.

The film ties in the madness of modern technology, in this case a sort of spider form of a drone, with old cultures – in this case the order of an arranged marriage.

The film follows, a break-up as it happens in the dark of a dance club.  “I love you, I love you,” are the words begged by Gord (Joe Cole) whose girlfriend has dumped him.  At work, his supervisor makes him promise that he will go dating again, by connecting with at least 10 people on a dating site.  Gord’s job is surveillance.  He monitors, using robots (a robotic spider), a pipeline halfway around the world in Northern Africa.  One night,  Gord notices a young woman, Ayusha, (Lina El Arabi), sitting alone in the dunes waiting to meet her lover.  It turns out that Ayusha is planning to go away on a boat with her lover, in order to escape an arranged marriage by her parents to an older man.  They need money which the lover is supposed to earn from stealing oil from the pipeline.  Gord witnesses the lover’s death through the robotic spider in an accidental explosion.  Gord helps her – she is his Juliet – at risk of losing his job.

Joe Cole and El Arabi, though amateurs deliver memorable performances.  Cole looks like the everyday nobody who is still an individual in his own right.  Cole seems to have some raw and redness at the back of his neck, seen throughout the film but somehow clears up at the end of the film.   I wonder if this is deliberate, the allergy due to is stress of losing his girlfriend.

It is  clear that Gord and Ayusha are not lovers.  But it is clear that the two are connected by circumstance.  Nguyen’s film is slow moving, but surprisingly very engaging.  Nguyen has the talent of being able to keep his audience glued to the screen by means of details in the plot, one example being of Gord blackmailing his supervisor or and another by observing his supervisor’s sleeping habits.

There are two points in the film that stretches credibility.  One is the robot blasting one a window of a house, thew window just popping open after the blast.  The other is the ending where Gord and Ayusha agree to meet a t a fixed time and place in Paris.

EYE ON JULIET is meticulous filmmaking and it shows.

Clip: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=39r8FF94Iro

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Hot Docs 2018: TRANSFORMER (USA 2018) ***1/2

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In the summer of 2015, former US Marine and world record weightlifter Matt “Kroc” Kroczaleski was publicly outed as being transgender. The reaction was universal: her sponsors abandoned her… See full summary »

Writers:

Michael Del Monte, Paul Kemp (story editor)

TRANSFORMER, the true transgender story of a muscled power lifter undergoing a sex change operation offers an unique perspective on the transgendered community and how each transition is unique to the person transitioning.  Janae (aka Matt) Kroc was as masculine as one can be prior to her transition, a world record powerlifter renowned for her masculinity. When she transitioned, she struggled with remaining true to her passions as a powerlifter while wanting to become more feminine.  The film illustrates a lesson that transitioning does not mean leaving one person behind to become another – so audiences should be prepared to be taking for quite the ride.

The film also shows the sadness at people in the world who still stupid and are unacceptable of gays or people who are different in general.  A moving while disturbing segment has protesters during an LGTT march.  These people carry just awful and nasty holding signs like LGBT (Let God Burn Them) and HOMO Sex is Sin.  Well, Kroc has admitted earlier in the film that he is still attracted to females and not men.  After the segment when the camera then focuses on Kroc back in male clothes, one certainly gains a new respect for this man – one who is able to stand up for what he believes and to challenge all the unaccepting idiots in the world, who are the ones who should burn in hell.  Director has lifted this film that could have been a freak show turn into something more insightful.

Trailer: https://vimeo.com/233416373

 

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