1pg Short Script – BLAME GAME by Sonny Dyon

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Watch the September 2016 Winning Short Screenplay.

BLAME GAME  Written by Sonny Dyon

SYNOPSIS:

Genre: Comedy, Action.

It is about giving it all to be with the one you love.

CAST LIST:

NARRATOR – Julian Ford
JULIE – Alicia Payne
ROM – Khoen Clarke

Get to know the winning writer:

What is your screenplay about?

It’s about miscommunication and the “blame game” couples play when they fight.

What genres does your 1pg. short fall under?

Action Comedy.

Why should this screenplay be made into a movie?

I’d love to see a full-scale version of this story, kind of a Mr. and Mrs. Smith vibe, I think it would be a blast!

How would you describe this script in two words?

MisCommunication

What movie have you seen the most times in your life?

Fight Club? Maybe Caddyshack? I’ve seen Chinatown a dozen times at least.

How long have you been…

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Died Today (September 22nd): George C. Scott (1927–1999)

georgecscottGeorge C. Scott (1927–1999)

Born: October 18, 1927 in Wise, Virginia, USA
Died: September 22, 1999 (age 71) in Westlake Village, California, USA

Married to: Trish Van Devere (14 September 1972 – 22 September 1999) (his death)
Colleen Dewhurst (4 July 1967 – 2 February 1972) (divorced)
Colleen Dewhurst (1960 – 1965) (divorced) (2 children)
Patricia Reed (1 March 1955 – 5 June 1960) (divorced) (2 children)
Carolyn Hughes (30 August 1951 – 1 January 1955) (divorced) (1 child)

[when asked for suggestions on how to judge acting] I have three tests. First, which dominates, the character or the actor? With very few exceptions it should be the character. Second, on film – as opposed to stage – we’re pretty much playing basic emotions: love, anger, fear, pity. So the trick is whether you can come up with any fresh choices to present these common emotions. Third – and this is the quality that separates the great ones from the good ones – I look for a “joy of performing” quality. Who had that quality? As much as anyone, Jimmy Cagney [James Cagney].

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Happy Birthday: Lawrence Gilliard Jr.

lawrencegilliardjrLawrence Gilliard Jr.

Born: September 22, 1971 in New York City, New York, USA

I just got lucky with Straight Out of Brooklyn (1991). I just went out on an audition and got the role. Since then, I’ve done some stuff, but it’s hard for African-American actors, period! There just isn’t any material out there for us, and what there is, is the same: profanity, violence, etc.

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Happy Birthday: Mireille Enos

mireilleenos.jpgMireille Enos

Born: September 22, 1975 in Houston, Texas, USA

Married to: Alan Ruck (4 January 2008 – present) (2 children)

[re late start in movies] I don’t know that I would have been a Hollywood ingénue. But the roles that are available as a 30-something-year-old woman are so much more interesting. And this all kind of happened when I already had found my husband, our family was on its way – I found out that I got World War Z (2013) while at Babies “R” Us getting diapers.

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Happy Birthday: Tatiana Maslany

tatianamaslany.jpgTatiana Maslany

Born: September 22, 1985 in Regina, Saskatchewan, Canada

Sci-fi sheds light on what’s going on in society, albeit in a kind of fantastical world. It is resonant with what’s actually happening, but I think people overlook it because it’s not very on-the-nose.

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Film Review: MILLER’S CROSSING, 1990

Tribute review as it’s Ethan Coen’s birthday today.


millers_crossing_posterMILLER’S CROSSING, 1990
Movie Reviews

Directed by Joel and Ethan Coen
Starring: Gabriel Byrne; Marcia Gay Harden; John Turturro; Jon Polito; Albert Finney
Review by Tom Coatsworth

SYNOPSIS:

A gangland war erupts; one mobster falls from power as another rises; a lover’s triangle tears two friends apart. The one man owes the other — to repay him he must go undercover and join the enemy, forsaking love and friendship – he must go to Miller’s Crossing.

REVIEW:

Oh for the days when the talented brothers Coen knew how to finish a film. With ‘Millers’ Crossing’ they hit the sweet spot — a complex tale set in Prohibition – a tale of love, betrayal and redemption; featuring a gangland war between Irish and Italian mobs, and two lover’s triangles – one straight, one gay. It springs from the Dashiell Hammett style of crime story; plays with the genre, masters it, and then transcends it altogether to become something greater.

Tom Reagan (Byrne) is right hand man to Leo’s (Albert Finney) gang leader. Tom sees all the angles. Its 1929, an Eastern city. (Filmed in New Orleans.) Johnny Caspar (Jon Polito) wants to rub out Bernie Bernbaum but he needs Leo’s permission. Bernie has been tampering with the fix. Every time Caspar fixes a fight the odds go straight to hell – this on account Bernie (John Turturro) has the inside scoop from Mink – Eddie Dane’s boy – and the Dane works for Caspar. Love triangle number two.

For Tom it’s simple: Leo should let Johnny bump off Bernie. Johnny’s too valuable for business and too strong to ignore, whereas Bernie is a worthless grifter who will bring no good to anyone. The catch is Leo is seeing Verna (Harden), Bernie’s sister. The double catch is that Tom is also bedding Verna on the sly: love triangle number one. But he won’t let bedroom politics interfere with business. Leo tells Johnny to dangle – he’s not selling out Verna’s brother.

Writers generally introduce their theme in Act 1. The Coen’s tell us on page one, line one, in Johnny Caspars’ ironic speech to Leo: ‘friendship, character, ethics’. It’s funny that a mobster is concerned with ethics and character when it comes to the fix and laying a bet, but that is the central issue in the film. Tom can barely live with himself for betraying his friend and boss. His desire to make good is the driving force in the narrative. But he’s a complicated character, expertly played by Byrne, and you’re never quite sure what his motivation is.

So Leo puts a tail on Verna for protection. The man winds up dead in an alley; Leo blames Johnny and orders a police crack down — a huge mob war ensues. In a remarkable sequence that took weeks to shoot we see Leo at home enjoying a cigar in bed while ‘Danny Boy’ plays on the phonograph. Downstairs his bodyguard lies dead, his fallen cigarette starts a fire. Two thugs with Tommie guns and trench coats move ominously up the stairs. Cut to Leo enjoying the tune and his stogy – but something catches his eye – smoke rising through the floor boards.

He moves to the side of the bed. Cut to the assassins walking down the hall. Leo watches the door, puts out his stogy. The door bursts open, Leo reaches for his bedside pistol and hits the deck, ducking beneath the bed — a spray of bullets splintering floorboards. Leo caps one in the ankle; the man falls, catching another bullet in the brain. The other punk flees. Leo has a Tommie gun now – he jumps from the second story window and as the house goes up in flames he makes the bad guy do a little dance as he pumps him full of lead. (It is completely gratuitous violence and we are bad bad children for enjoying it.)

Suddenly a getaway car bursts from the shadows spewing machine gun fire. Leo turns with authority and takes out the car; it hits a tree, bursts into flames. Leo brings the stogy from his pocket and plants it in his mouth as ‘Danny Boy’ finishes — astonishing.

His victory is short lived however as the momentum and power move to Caspar. Tom tries to get Leo to see the truth of his situation – that Bernie is the heart of the problem and not Caspar. But Leo is blinded by love and wants to marry Verna; so Tom comes clean and admits to the affair. Leo throws Tom and Verna out of his life and she ends up at Toms. There is some talk of going away together but Tom makes a grim decision.

Caspar is king now. Tom goes to his office, offering his smarts – despite a weakness for booze and horses he’s the wisest guy in a town full of wise guys. So Caspar takes him on if he’ll sell out Bernie and Tom goes for it. But he doesn’t expect to find himself at Miller’s Crossing, a dark forest where the weak go to die, a gun in his hand — a tearful Bernie begging for his life — with orders to put one in the brain. How far will he go to help his old friend, Leo? And what will it cost him?

Is there a finer film composer than Carter Burwell? Ummm…maybe. But you had to think about it. He’s one of the best. Every film he touches plumbs hidden depths in his hands. Marcia Gay Harden makes her film debut with a stellar performance and some of the greatest dialogue: Tom: “All in all not a bad guy — if looks, brains and personality don’t count”. Verna: “You better hope they don’t”.

Byrne is magnificent as Tom Reagan, and John Turturro makes his reputation with this one performance. Barry Sonnenfeld is cinematographer; Dennis Gassner, production design. We’ve come to expect exceptional writing from the brothers but this is just ridiculously good writing.

The Coen’s will sort out their performance problems one day; I envision a late return to form. In the meantime we have this early masterpiece – completely ignored at the 1991 Oscars – it stands today with the very finest films of that decade, indeed of any decade.

 

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Film Review: GROUNDHOG DAY, 1993

Tribute review as it’s Bill Murray’s birthday today! His best film.

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GROUNDHOG DAY, 1993
Classic Movie Review
Directed by Harold Ramis
Starring Bill Murray, Andie McDowell, Chris Elliott
Review by Russell Hill

SYNOPSIS:

A cynical television weatherman reporting on the annual festival finds himself experiencing the same day repeatedly, allowing him to change his life and try to win over the woman of his dreams.

REVIEW:

Criminally snubbed by the Oscars but now one of the most highly regarded movies, “Groundhog Day” is not like many comedies. Its blend of science fiction with comedy allows even the most die-hard Sci-Fi fan to enjoy the films rosy and comfortable narrative.

The protagonist of the film is Phil Connors (Murray). A weatherman at a reasonably successful cable company, he really is the epitome of a jerk. Despite his joking on-screen personality to those who watch his forecast, he mocks those who tries to establish any form of human contact with him. But when he is sent to report on Pennsylvania’s famous festival, he is to work with a new producer Rita (McDowell). Rita is the exact opposite of Phil. An optimistic, cultured individual, Phil takes an instant like to her. But how on earth would Phil ever tingle Rita’s heart strings?

The initial weather report goes well. All involved are happy, but for some reason they are stopped from returning to the station by a heavy snow storm and are forced to stay overnight in Punxsutaweny. The next day, Phil awakes to discover it is February 2nd once more. This is not right, Phil thinks. Maybe he dreamt it all. But what kind of dream is so vivid that he can remember the tiniest of details, from what the incredibly annoying yet likeable Ned Ryerson (Toblowsky) does for a living to what his ever-faithful cameraman Larry (Elliot) would say. And, it seems, only Phil appears to be experiencing this insane case of déjà vu.

The next day, Phil awakes and it happens again. Ned Ryerson is still annoying him, his foot for some reason finding the icy puddle of water and that darn groundhog being celebrated. What is Phil to do?

At first, thanks to some advice by some inebriated locals, Phil sees his situation as an advantage. His actions have no consequences, and thus goes on to do whatever the heck he likes. Stealing money, wooing complete strangers; no feat is impossible to achieve. However, despite all his tomfoolery, he finds that he still cannot achieve what he really wants; making Rita fall in love with him.

Despite his hard work, he finds that feat near on impossible. For what seems years for Phil, but only twenty-four hours for those enjoying the festivities, he fails. His thoughts turn suicidal. What is the point of life if I cannot share it with Rita, he thinks. But even dying is something he cannot achieve. Every morning he awakes just as he has done the previous countless other times. Screw it, he thinks. Rita’s always-ever pleasant nature convinces Phil that he has been blessed, and Phil goes out to do good for others, rather than for himself. But, despite his actions, will he ever become that better person Rita so obviously wants him to be?

Directed by Harold “Egon Spengler” Ramis, this film seems to have an appealing aspect for all. The good use of comedy, combined with the romantic sub-plot along with an added sprinkling of science fiction, mix well to create a high-quality comedy. As always, Murray is his usual brilliant self. Even when he has no dialogue, his facial reactions chuckle even the most placid of audiences. McDowell, who is not as bankable as Murray, delivers with her girl-next-door presence. It’s hard to believe that barely twelve months later, her role in “Four Weddings and a Funeral” would be rubbished and mocked for years to come. But here, she is as cute as a box of new-born puppies.

The surprise winner of the movie is Toblowsky. I was as surprised as the next person when I noticed that this actor, who takes each role seriously with not many laughs coming from him, seemingly relishing acting the part of the clown. How he ever achieves the same quality of “Ned, Ned Ryerson” each take is the mark of a great actor. As already mentioned, the reason why this film was snubbed by the Oscars remains a mystery. It’s not every film that has been recognised by spiritual leaders. Ramis mentions on the DVD commentary that he still receives letters congratulating him on directing such a positive movie showing that no matter how bad things are there is always another way out. Phil’s attempts to better himself are both humorous but informative as well; no matter how long it takes if there is something you would like to achieve it is possible. A message we can all take to heart.

Now fifteen years old, “Groundhog Day” is a hodgepodge of ideas that merge together to create an entertaining movie. Murray has never been at his comedic finest, and the films conclusion is justice to what Phil has experienced that leaves the audience with a rewarding feeling that seems to be lacking in most contemporary movies. Although Phil complains that other days in his life should have been repeated rather than February 2nd, I believe that the eventual outcome is most satisfying for him. A highly recommended movie that appeals to all members of the family.

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Sept. 2016 Winner: Novel Transcript of HEARING THOUGHTS by Anthony Diffley

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Watch the September 2016 Winning Novel Reading.

Performed by Kaleb Alexander

Novel Transcript of  HEARING THOUGHTS  by Anthony Diffley

Get to know the winning writer: 

What is your novel about?

My novel is about a young New York city man who aquires the ability to hear other peoples after he mysteriously disappears from his friends, while on a camping trip. He does not know how to properly use this talent at first but when approached by the CIA, questioning about his disappearance, and having lost his wife on 9/11, it doesn’t take him long to know what to do with it.

What genres would you say this novel is in?

Science Fiction, Action Adventure

How would you describe this story in two words?

“Thought Provocative”

What movie have you seen the most in your life?

4) Most Watched Movie: Without a doubt- “The Godfather”

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Short Stories by Barry Brennessel

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Watch the September 2016 Winning Short Story Readings.

7 Stories by Barry Brennessel. Performed by Kaleb Alexander, Erynn Brook, Val Cole.

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Get to know the winning writer: 

What is your 1pg Short Story about?

All seven stories (EGG BOY, HIDOI, HIBAKUSHA, IN UNISON, OLD SOUL, SACRIFICE, SNOW MONSTERS) are snapshots of people struggling at various points in Japanese history.

What genres would you say this short story is in?

Drama. These are people fighting with emotional, financial, personal, and physical stress.

How would you describe this story in two words?

Life’s challenging.

What movie have you seen the most in your life?

I would have to say the record goes to “It’s a Mad, Mad, Mad, Mad World.”

How long have you been working on this story?

Each of the seven stories took about 3 weeks to write and polish.

Do you have an all-time favorite…

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